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The darkness never consumed me
Instead, I consumed it
And let it grow inside
Spreading its roots far and wide

I didn't try to fight it
I allowed it to take hold
While it twisted and contorted
And bent and distorted

Then I noticed the fog in my own eyes
And the stains seeping through my skin
But by then I was too far gone
The reaper had come to sing his song

As the mortal melody filled my ears
The revelation filled my head
I had given the darkness full control
I had given the darkness heart and soul

When the last grim chorus finally faded
And the reaper left upon the pale
I saw he had left me only half alive
With only half my will to thrive

I now must feed on the life of others
Who still have unbroken innocence
And when ultimately I feel the sinister urge
I let the darkness inside emerge...

Happy Halloween...
S'up. This is my contribution to the 2012 "season" of All Hallows' Eve, otherwise known as Halloween. I didn't try to make it scary exactly, but dark and creepy was definitely a goal. So please, leave a comment. You don't have to fave it, or check out my other stuff, just comment.

Or I'll eat your parents. :evillaugh:

But, most importantly, enjoy. :D

P.S. This is part of the "Neverending Story" in #DearWriter. This would be Part 2, but I set it up as sort of a prequel of sorts for the piece that came before me, by ~aylee95. Here's a link to it: [link]. Information on the Neverending Story can be found here [link], here [link], and here [link].

EDIT: Just some edits that made it better. I don't usually edit my poems, but it only has twelve views, so it's not that big a deal.
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NinjaSkillz99 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Student General Artist
I just got mindfucked at how AWESOME THIS IS!!!! Except for the eating le parents part. I like my mom T_T
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BrotherGrimSVSD Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student Writer
You left a comment, so your mom is safe...

For now...:evillaugh:
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NinjaSkillz99 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Yay! :dummy:

If you eat my momma, I'll eat you ._.
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BrotherGrimSVSD Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student Writer
So, by extension, you would also beating your mother.
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NinjaSkillz99 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
>_> Touché. If you attempt to eat my mom I'll eat you then.
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BrotherGrimSVSD Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student Writer
Your mind would explode from the combined awesomeness of both of us. Like if Chuck Norris and Jesus both walked into a bar, the bar would likewise explode.
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NinjaSkillz99 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Then I'll kidnap you. Then I wouldn't explode from all the awesomeness. And LOL!!!
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student Writer
i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!! :O
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BrotherGrimSVSD Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student Writer
Woot! :w00t!: Thanks. :D
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KM6 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012
awesome! this was just. oh my god, there are no words for how amazing this is! X3 gave me chills!
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